Singing inspector
Singing inspector
Charles
Mr Raymond mad me, so angry because he made me sing and I hate singing. We sang pretty Poly then he shouted at us and he looked like the picture of the Bull of Bushan. So he is mean but some people actually like him witch is really like bad so I wanna eather get him gone or sit and do maths I never wanna see that guy again. He was extremely rude to me because I cannot sing good but we say appreciate people who they are not how they sing. I am gonna ask principle if he can fire him. Some bad school days.
We began to sing. I sang in a low voice pretty poly pretty poly what’s o’clock what’s o’clock and Benny who is tall sang in a high squeaky voice pretty poly pretty poly and Mr R shouted a waste of time of two voiceless idiots which made us sad.I wish that piece of a bull would go to court.
He is so mean to me and bennie. He will punish you if he wants to.
He is so mean to me and bennie. He will punish you if he wants to.
So we all hope he gets fired soon as possible then everybody will be happy that that angry wasteless sinning class will be done yay. Then we will live lives better so we can be happy forever.
Liam, you express the strong emotions of your character quite clearly. You need to do a lot of work on your editing, however, especially your punctuation. You also need to edit out the slang, such as "wanna'' which you use frequently!
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